Narration

My persuasive argument thesis is

Music has a considerable effects on human mind.

1. What do people already know about my topic?

Everyone knows that they can get in contact in music easily everywhere they go and anytime they want.

2. What research has already been done about my topic?

(1) http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/columns/general_music/music_and_the_social_effects.html

     >>>effects of music socially.

(2)http://sctoday.co.kr/news/articleView.html?idxno=14980

    http://blog.naver.com/pensamiento1/220069910808

   >>>related news or blog case of Seo Tae Ji 'Come back home'

(3)http://www.cerebromente.org.br/n15/mente/musica.html

   >>>the examples of  Albert Einstein or Thomas Jefferson
(4)http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_music
   >>>history of music

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

If my argument is right, people should acknowledge the positive effects of music on human mind and try to adapt music to positive and better use.

My Narration

 Music has been from the past to present and will be in the future with various forms. According to the documents, the most isolated tribal groups had a form of music. And it proves that music is likely to have existed in the ancestral period prior to the dispersal of humans around the world and it means that music may have been in existence for at least 50,000 years then evolved to become a fundamental constituent of human life. There are some examples of effects of music on human mind that played one of the basic actions through some greatest people in our history. 

 First, Thomas Jefferson who has written the Declaration of Independence is one of the case who influenced by music. Thomas Jefferson declared that music is the favorite passion of his soul and he loved music. When he could not find correct wording for a certain part of it, he played his violin to help him get the words from his brain onto the paper.
 Second, Albert Einstein is the second case of the greatest person who was influences by music. Albert's parents bought him a violin instead of following the school's advice that he was too stupid to learn and it would be a waste of resources for the school to invest time and energy in his education. Then he became a fantastic performer of the violin and music helped Albert Einstein become the greatest person. Einstein himself says 
that the reason he was so smart is because he played the violin. Besides, a friend of Einstein said that the way Einstein figured out his problems and equations was by improvising on the violin.
 As we can see the cases of the greatest people, it has turned out that a moderate noise level of the music can improve creativity. The way this works is that moderate noise levels increase processing difficulty which promotes abstract processing, leading to higher creativity. In other words, when we struggle to process things as we normally would, we resort to more creative approaches. Even it looks paradoxical slightly, music can improve creativity.