Peer Review 20404김지우

Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
5, 내용도 매우 흥미로웠고 내용구성도 좋았으며,읽는 과정에서도 재미있었다.

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
잘했음

Thesis
What is the thesis?
Students' various emotions affect the lesson differently and teachers should use them properly in class. 

Is the thesis clear and debatable?
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If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
지우랑 똑같이 썼을 것 같음,

Any other thoughts?


Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
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Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? 
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Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
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Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
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Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it 
adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
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Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis? 
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What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?


Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 
.agree
When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
agree

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
not chaged

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?
잘해서 어디를 고쳐주어야 할지모르겠음.

Research
Is the author using research effectively? 
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Is the research from appropriate sources?
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Are the sources obvious?
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Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
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Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
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